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Old 07-04-04, 02:48 AM   #10
Metaskriptz
Doper Then Dope
 
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Da Joka-You came aight had not that much multies
But mainly similies was aight and metaphores stayed basic
..but you didnt come that hard some nice complexity and vocab
and nice idea's

7/3-You came the same but your rhymes was basic ..
I five you the Complexity and thje structure botrh kindof
stayed there but you almost had it but slipped right derr on
like 4 lines

OVERALL-Both didnt come that Hard kindof weak but
overall I think Joker takes this by a lil though becuz he had a slight more

v/Da Joka

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