hmm...

seven:"Da Jokah" aint no "Villain"-Dont Front Son- "I'm-Ya-Hero"
I'll "Snipe" This "comic" like "DC"- Votes is mine Five-Ta-Zero~(1)
^good opener..7/10
Don't like to Tattle- But It's Proven You Only Battle-Newbs
It's a Fact- Half the cats you beat have only Battled-YOU!
^nice punch...6/10
Ya Crew full of Ship Jumpers- But Yall ALL Loyal-To-Penis
It won't Help you win- But sure makes corn-holes Convienient
^eh.. bar helped your flow points, but punch wasent that hard..
Dog you from Queens? now I see the kind of whore-You-Is
When Ja Rules wack ass already Got Signed Before-You-Did
^that stuck lol....7/10
You Try to Substitute Punchlines with "Reppin Da Hood"
You misunderstood- Ya hometown does ya record-no-good
^stuck a lil bit..6/10
My Styles Elegant- You Left Dead and sprawled with no evidence
Except the "Young Blood" Spread on the walls of ya tenements(2)
^not the greatest closer...ok..wasent a punch there


jokah:ayo my flow iz Ill....and ma Intentionz are drastic//
my hallow tip bullets will fill....and turn ya whole body plastic//
^weak opener..no punch
have u dressed up makin a bill..next thing.. u left in a caskit//
like the iraqiez iam a kill,,u and ma bullets elope like da ball n basket//
^no punch..just gunplay
ayo my verse isLimited Edition like dem baseball cards//
talk shit..ill have D2R crew like ma shoes and lace-yall-hard//
^ehh....wasent feelin this
ayo its bottom of Sevenand iam steallin tha Third//
runnin for home base..yellin at cha pitcha flippin tha third//
^no punch
aight mayne ill Tell U Why Iam Madd Son..*showin da gun*//
cuz iam pissed of at bitches like u..u a sadd one.*KNowin i wun*//
^no punch
Like pac n suge..iam a stay mobed up and stay a Young Blood//
ill knock da wood..have u all robbed up..9+ya head.. i found out u got some blood//
^gunplay, but no punch
yo u kno u aint winnin like ma bois gettin bill preventions//
and d2r aint got shit on ma bois tha Ill Intentionz//
^wasent effective....would have flipped this bar..first line should have have came last...

seven:you had flow,and your ppunches were on point..
jokah:i havent seen any of your other verses,but you lack punches..you didnt hit him once forreal..and gunplay dont get you know where unless its ina tight punch..stay up

v/seven third

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