"Will you pick me up?"...

most def..great poem..i liked this most:

Here I float
A naive little snowflake
Pretty to look at but useless
The earth approaches when I suddenly see
A pile of white
Now I have the choice
Keep my pride and die a melting death

great expression....

can u peep mine and give feedback...Ubiquity

Peace

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