For everyone to be talking shit..Bone'z pulled out ontop with this one..his verse was weak, but it was mad funny..played lines..but some of them was creative..need to fix your structure..and Bretern..he didnt bite you ass..cant you see it's the same name...he recycled..but he still got the win..had some wordplay..that natcho line was funny as fuck..I will give your verse a 5/20

Thing..too laid back..underestimated him..punches was weak..a very sad attempt at multis..no real hard hitting punches..vocab was.."ewww'..you dont use the word "ewww' in your damn verse..not a good idea..no wordplay..or none was evident..anyway..I will give your verse a 4/10..
yep..my vote goes to bonez..too bad I cant vote..but Im stating my opinion..

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Kry·o·gen·x [ kr ə jénniks ]

noun

Study of Extremely Low Temperatures: (1)A branch of physics that studies the causes and effects of extremely low temperatures.(2)A very dope rapper that appeared on Http://www.Rapbattles.com is September 2003.He is known to be highly contagious.If touched, you might become "sonned".