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Old 12-21-04, 07:50 PM   #8
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Pop Lotty
Recognized as the best, but you have no accomplishments dog
Tell me why you got kicked outta AI...after they fucking fell off
best opener lol-- 8/10
You supposed beat me?...C'mon, elevation has gotta be a must
So why did it take you 30 battles to realize that you fucking suck?
hard hitting, coulda been worded better 7/10
Type to fall back...when you know I’m coming up against you
And Troop, it wont be taking notes, when I put these bullets in you
nice…. 7/10
Stop acting like you elite...we all know ya whole crew is ass
Only good Council round here...will be the reason I advance
decent.. 6/10
Doggy, you won't be able to sleep when Pop wanna haunt ya
One shot from my mag...will leave ya tee off like golfers
c’mon Mike Wack… 0/10
Broke nigga, think a gourmet meal is at the drive through
So I should back out, cuz Troop needs the money more than I do
aight closer.. 7/10
35/60 ~58.3%

Troop
This Pop's got's 1 Prediction on Winnin...Wait I'll TripleThats
Spermicidal Retna Covered Equals.them Illusionary Diplomats
vocab-centric, but aight….. 6/10
Commenting on Nigga.. As if Hawk Ever Concealed a Hee Ta
Had Enough?... Why did Ike Mistreat u tha 1st Rnd Tee Na?
best line in your verse.. 9/10
12 Victories..thats Newbie Ratio save ya Rambled like Savy
U couldnt Drop Punches.If Conflicts you Handled like ya Avy
worded badly, eh 5/10
Quadroople Shots to Pop's Lots.. leave em with Slerd Werdz
2am Drops..during Hand Intermission.heard they Jerk in Jerz?
c’mon Troop.. Wack 0/10
12-19 so its a Toss up if your Lyrix are Eva used or Flaunted
Wheres my Prize flow..for Showcaseing Malibu's Most Wanted
lmao nice one… pretty good.. 8/10
Lotty's Verses dont Seem as Hungry..Explotation of ya Width
EStyle Diminished afta Pink Finished Who u n Association With?
this was an aight closer… 6/10
34/60 ~56.7%

It’s clear that Troop had the vocabulary in this match.. Too much is unnecessary, it throws off your flow and doesn’t help when you try to deliver a hard hitting punch.. Your best line was the one about Mike battling Ike with the connection to Tina Turner which gave you had the upper hand for minute, u had nice multis and analogies (metaphors) I have noticed, but u tried to get too technical when it was not necessary which messed it up for you.. Not a bad verse but some un-useful lines in there.. Mike, in a similar situation, you had sum wordplay but no multis.. You had the better flow and your vocab wasn‘t stretched.. Both of you had nice structures. Mike took this because he had harder hitting punches in his verse….

Vote/Mike Hawk
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