^agree with everything. Flow your first punch was pretty good well worded. Second bar had nice meta usage but was only ok. wording was just a lil off. Top you had a strong flip, nice first punch. Showed potential, 2nd bar was kind of weak though. you never wanna say ''i'm speakin of''. that really didn't go good at all.


v. flow.

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