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Old 11-08-05, 11:01 PM   #76
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lol @ the Apexx dick ridin

the beat sounds dope so far
OH NEVER FUCKIN MIND!

You sound funny, like..ionno, not bad funny, and not haha funny, but, like..ionno.

1st verse
nice, hype delivery
the beat wears on me after a while
so its gettin dope

chorus
aiigh, I guess

verse 2
more punchlines, but your flow messes up 2 times I counted.

the lyrics is mad simple
the rhyme scheme is mad simple
but overall is decent its a "dead banga" as you put it.
kind of short.
we should do a remix to this shit. holla at me
this feedback is for the RG
Return the favor of my track
diamond in the rough
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Originally Posted by strobe
If you do kegel excercises, you would be able to do something similar without having to hold your tip shut with your hand. After you've been doing them, hold off ejaculating as long as you can to really let the pressure build and then aim for your girlfriend's eye and let 'er rip.. You might get lucky and shoot her eye out. That's probably exaggerating it a bit, but it will still be hilarious
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