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Old 02-09-06, 09:20 AM   #10
H.D.
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This was cool, I liked the way you rhyme coming and going in each line... Your vocab drops to a lower level after the 1st few bars... At first you had a nigga looking up words... than it just got easier... *shruggs* Ya structure was sound, flow was good... and there were several stand alone lines I fucked with in this... good drop... keep doing what you do

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