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Old 08-21-04, 11:43 PM   #7
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Voted For: DrasticMeasureZ

You win this because you had actuall punches...although some were wack, they were atleast punches...You had an ok flow, shaky in places...but ok for the most part...The slashes at the end its ugly...and quotin multis and shit is gay...and jus quotin shit is even gayer....some werent even punches, jus quoted...

other guy had a wack verse...no good lines...no punches, jus lines and lines about he did this, he did that...wasnt feelin it...strutcture was bad...look at other battles to see wut structure you should use.
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