Nice battle...

Daemon: good concept you went with, interesting creativity used. The vocabulary was rather complex throughout the entire piece, imagery was excellent, emotion was there too. Flow was decent but what I felt was missing was depth, more details and a more indepth storyline. I would've loved to see you elaborate more and have an even stronger built-up towards the end.

.Lola Cruez. II: very nice piece from you here, I enjoy the approach, rather original. First part seemed right out of The Exorcist but then you gave it your own switch which I liked. Good balance in vocab, emotion was so raw but the imagery was at a very high level. It was as if I was there viewing everything right away, flow might be improved on though...

My vote goes to .Lola Cruez. II for a more indepth and interesting piece

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