You got an interesting accent. it works wit the beat though.
the intro was kinda comical but it still worked.
i actually like your flow. but i can't really understand what your saying sometimes cuz your doubles are overlapping a little.
the hook is pretty cool.
....the harmonizing...needs work.
i respect ya for trying it but it still needs mad work.
otherwise quality needs some work but its got some potential. just needs some work.
that end....ahhh..that hummin or whatever has got to go....
in the doubles or whatever that was...