such shitty quality i turned it off halfway thru,shit was hurting my ears,no hate,gotta work on your addlibs and your dubbs alot more,ive heard better shit from u.
work on your mastering or get your dubbs and addlibs on point,or get another recording program,started listening again to the second half.......... and turn your piitch and vocals and down.lyrics were sort of alright though and the ending sucked no hate return the favor.......or in other words post feedback on my tracks

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