Voted For: fraud

DP: I wasn't really feelin yo verse. The only thing i can give you is that you had better structure. I mean you did have a couple of iight lines but little shit was holdin yo verse back. Like tryna to make "hoovs" and "truths" rhyme.

Fraud: Your verse was iight. You had a punch or two in there and there was some decent word play also. But you need to work on your structure. You need to make it easier to see where one line ends and another begins. After a line you should hit enter or have some type of punctuation.