don't quite kno who you are so i can't really speak on your elevation as an individual but what i can do is critique what is presented in this piece left for feed. Well first of all and formost before anything can be done plz work on your spelling and proper pronounciation of words becuase its.....well rather shameful. Work on your syllable count to even out your lines and give your piece a cleaner look that will also help with the flow or your pieces you plan on dropping from here on out, be more original so many ppl drop the ol' "Do I Still Got It?" piece for attention or remembrence on others to reminist on the past of a decent emcee when its not neccessary. well i can go on and on and on about what to improve but its not really my type of way or helping someone....

....just keep in mind elevation is a must.

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