You the last shit about bein a herbavor was pretty tight. You still need to work on the flow tho. Don't rush the beat like you do. kick back on it and roll wit that shit. And for your quality... move your face away from the mike. If its records low, adjust the volume in Acid and through some eq on it until it sounds nice. Work on the lyrical eq by itself... without the beat. Then listen to it with the beat and adjust the levels. Through a little bit of reverb on it if you have to. Other than that... just elevate your lyrics like everyone of us need to do. Your shitll start to sound nice when u keep workin on it.

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