this was a really close battle, both of you seem to have the near enough the same styles of writing....
mystic: your verse had really nice imagery and creativity, flow was on point and i loved the way you told the story.....
mad knight:i enjoyed reading your verse equally as much, but i think mystic's verse had more depth than yours, it seemed to be more complex, you had imagery though and described everything well......

overall....mystic chaos gets my vote coz i felt that there was more depth to his verse and more imagery.....

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