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Old 04-30-06, 04:15 PM   #10
Sean Gunner
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Both need to up their writing style. The verses are really simplistic, and not in a good way. Both came rather predictable and need to think more outside the box. Nothing that stood out to me in either verses. Keep writing.

v- Precize for some story and keepin my interest a little.
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