im peepin this sence yall gave me feed..

beat is kinda gay.. first guy has a dope flow i liked when it was fast.. you need better production on your vocals.. put some overdubs on them, then adlins on certain parts.. lyircs cool.. its dope.. id like to colab with the first cat.. hook is aight.. quality kinda sucks on it.. lyrics cool.. aight drop. first verse was the best, fell off on the second.. both of you need way better production.. i can help if you actually wanted to sound better

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