ok you guys both came dope......and unique...so thats good

1st verse
dope how you started it....i like your flow its nice...good shit yo
lyrically its dope and your on beat quality is good....nice shit yyo

chorus is catchy but could have been more clear so that i can go around singing it..lol

2nd verse ..
dopeness started this one out the same way as the 1st one...dope shit...quality was nice again......lyrics inthis one where a lil better in some ways......on beat again...if i would hav eto change one thing i would say lyrics...they are dope but need to be dooper ya feel..take more time to write.

3rd verse...
now that is dope that style you never dupilicate the same style or spit the same way wchich is dope...lyrics is dope quality also could have been better but shit was nice


i really liked this shit.,....nice....just dont liek the cussing that much
shoudl make an edited version..lol so i can bumb it in my room

if oyu dont liek my feedback then fuck you becuase im just RTF since tonyself voted in one of my battles