Thread: Where i live
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Old 11-28-05, 10:02 PM   #9
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Originally Posted by C.A.L.I
i left feedback on 'deadweight' by 'erie' and 'strange fruit' by 'lil c'




I live
In a world where priests abuse children
Not in dark alleys
But in the same church of their lord
Where police murder our sons
And we’re raped of the culture we once had
Forced to modernize for our modern day oppressors
We lash out
We refuse to submit
And we are push to the wall
I live in a world
Where role models go to court
Role models go to rehab
And role models go to jail
Then role models claim not to be role models anymore
Is there really in a choice???
I live in a world
Where drug dealers are given longer sentences
Not because drugs have for so long destroyed our communities
But because drugs have reached THIER suburban America
And are destroying Thier community’s
Violent felones get less time.........
................as long as they stay in the ghetto
............as long as no one kills or robs no white people
Cuz we don’t have no white people in the slum
No black people neither
Only poor people with no green
I live
In a world where the media convicts before the jury
Where prostitution is legal through pornography
But illegal in the streets
..................at least it is until they can tax it properly
Because the world I live in is all about money
People fight for it
People kill for it
People die for it
Until everyone lives for it
You may think my world is a bad place
But guess what!!
............. I live
................In the same world as you



good work on this one to keep up the wok u wil make it big some day its all reality and i see your poems are based on reality and what really happen in our world not just your world its all baed on the real world that everyone lives in these days keep up it up fuck those punk ass niggas talking shit peace
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