i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
I’ve acknowledge your wack & I don’t blaim you.. I just blaim ur roots..
Cos the only time he gets girls..is on GTA’s street prostitutes..(sig)

^^nice punches and they was some god personals and humoris

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juss lost might as well delete yo self from dis tournament...
u gettin embaraseed go back 2 m-section from discourgment...
i take yo soul like mortal combat.. and leave it in "skriptz"....
then pass it verse back..right after ur lyrics easly get ripped...
throwing disconnected punches like his fist and wrist not connected...
i advance 2 da next round while he go 2 tutorial for some corrections....
teach u a lesson..verses gettin destroyed like his linez in lethal injection...
give u in affection..then bitchslapp u back 2 front linez to a new section...
killin him like fugee holders..polifick here ready roc dis baby back 2 bed....
blow his head off his shoulders..spit his wack lyrics back at him instead...

^^nice verse had me laughing and your punches was hard.....some was kinda lame but for the most part the shit was hot and i liked your structure and you flow was goin along ill......keep it up man

v/POL

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