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Old 07-30-04, 03:00 PM   #7
S e n s e R
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oh man ..this was an ok battle but lot..won this all the way..

due to...

flow - on beat..nice and steady..it was goin wit it nicely..i liked that alot..

delivery - once again nice, could of cut some words short in some lines..but still that didnt manage to down play ya shit na'mean..

punches - ok,...i sure as hell think dudes like you just startin must find a way to be alot more creative..but more of in the sense..thinkin of some shit really unexpected..catch my drift?..not to say yo punches lacked..its that when you write rhymes..it has to show that you actually took the time to "WRITE'EM" feel me..but still nice work..

quality - decent should of raised ya vocals a bit more but still ok..

and for my man enygma ..man if you ever need some one to mix ya shit down let me know..cuz you obviously aint good at it..just pace ya self next time na'mean..that beat was way too main stream for a tournament called "Got Skillz" be..feel me..but w.e...

My vote - Liquor of Tears
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