Excellent poem with in fact too many quotables. The concept first of all was something many will agree on or maybe open some people's eyes in a way to see their beloved country from another perspective. Your use of images was right on point, you didn't overdo them and in some places it was subtle yet still present. The emotion was definitely there, you could sense it in the choice of your words and the overall tone of this poem. The vocabulary was excellent too, you managed to keep it understandable yet added a good amount of complexity.

Props

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