Bad topic..too general

..Drama Queen..

It was a good drop...nothin really stood out to me as overly amazing or anything it was good though dont get me wrong...emotional good structure it read well the imagery was ok it was a decent drop..

7/10



..Anxiety..

As babies, we're carefree and we sleep in a basket...
Then grow up so one day we can sleep in a casket...
---this line had good imagery but the rhyming seemed forced

ok this peice was good i mean it was short and sweet right to the point...it had really good imagery to it good structure..the choice of vocab isnt what i woodnt have used, but thats nothing to hold agaisnt you everyone has theyre own style..

...I only brought up those two lines because it was the only part of the peice i didnt like

8.5/10

both had good peices there wasnt much wrong with either but anxiety had better iamgery more emotion to it (in my opinion of course) props to both..I hope to see more from both sides in the future and Id also like to face the winner..not for any kind of title shit u kno just pur fun