I like this....your tounge flippen is raw...flow is on point...I like your delivery and voice....Chorus coulda been better....ad libs work nicely...lyrics are cool....dope rhyme schemes...I was expecting it to be faster....cuz i spit fast myself n so do some of the people I rap wit....but nice none the less...3rd verse was the best....doooope...beat was nice especially if you made it yourself

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