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Old 12-31-03, 11:58 AM   #10
Red Scare
A.K.A Mischief Since '00.
 
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Was givin ya 40 minutes...so ur rap could put up a fight!
cuz for my verse to disembowel targets...U insight!
Ehh.. its decent not good 4/10
How u guh survive...u my pick for rhyme disintegration
Lines leavin ya so cold...u bout to pack for migration!
Weak and Newbish.... but i'll give you something.. 5/10
Like Gare coleman...to diss you...I just can't resist!
cuz I can destroy ya words more...Than an athiest!
What the Fuck?! 1/10
Flows hit ya like the jackpot...so fuk Lotto super 7
Just passed my 7th verse...already sent ya to heaven!
Weak and wack..... 3/10
After dis...bet u b sayin "Fuk that Carlos Delgado!!!"
Cuz ma verse "Jay'ed" ya n left ya blue for tomorrow!
probably your best punch, but its weak 5/10

Overall: 18/50


Man your lines are weak organize your wild-scripts
Writing about toilet paper dog I know your styles-shit
Poorly worded... but its weak 5/10
You froze up with your mild-spits I’ll have some peers-merk-ya
Who’s taking the votes? You can forget about pay like volunteer workers
WhAt?!?! 0.10/10
It’s been hot-year every bar I drop-scares
While hot lines in your verse are like your avatar there not-there
Your best punch 6/10
And you seeing me pay you better keep visioning
And I had to keep the lines low cause you always ‘tire’ your readers like Michelin
Wack and played 3/10
And you don’t have punches your lines are only talk
So watch me put this skate boarder underground like tony hawk
*no comment* .90/10

Overall: 15/50

Close but both were weak as hel.... P gets it .......^
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