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Old 10-18-05, 09:29 PM   #7
Crazy Hades
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By the way, with that chorus, this line cuts off just to force the rhyme.

My feelings are at there worst because my heart has burst
And now the tears emerse, im broken and this isnt the first
Another hurts done.......from a different person
This isnt the first but..........this is the worst one

Probably should be 'tears emerge' as well. 'I'm broken and this isn't the first'. First what? You cut it off.
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