wel this was both decent real good....kid i felt like apo, he is right you should have done your whole style like that cus it was more creative..plus your vocab was there but i felt your verse in the start and middle was kinda iffy and BLAH but your ending was WOW!...


Willnova yourverse was splendid but kill those lines man its hurting your structure and its kinda herbish but your story telling and choice of delivery was executed well i would flow off of it homie nice....im guessing you were like rapping as well as typing it right along?!..if so..well done!

nova takes it sorry!.
kid sense you couldve wone im telling you but half your verse was meh!.

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