this was off the hook

now wht im feelin the most is the way you set up the verses i.e ''the streets watchin etc.''
it rhymed fluently n'd volcabulary was up to a gud standard but cud do with mor bigger words ... not too much tho, structure... good try keep it level (lines ruffly same length)
good use of multi's and very mind gribbin discriptions as well high creativity--rare topik

.........yep thts it

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