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Old 09-09-04, 07:03 PM   #5
Enygma
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S e n s e R - Nice track. I was feelin the beat, but I thought you could have done better with it. I thought the second verse had the best flow in it....like the second or fourth bar or something....

please.. im usually in my forces often//
im lyricallly naucious picture me corporate office//
^^^ That one.....lol. That was probably the smoothest flow in the song

I liked the song, but I didn't think it was your best......keep droppin

Phenom-in-all - Beat is nice......your vocals are lacking a certain luster in the quality. Flow wasn't actually that bad, but yeah.....maybe if you shortened up your lines a bit, it would have flowed a little better. Boooooo @ Monopoly punch....lol. Ahead of your time, kinda played, but nice song/battle track overall

Peep my verse against Kingz.....pay no attention to the chorus.....lol. I'm still trying to figure a few things out.

Dethroning Kingz
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