yo, definatly breath control and maybe a better way to describe emotion is to feel the rhythm n find the tune and feeling inside the beat n mould your flow around that, put your all into it..

best rappers in my opinion are those who use all sorts of different flows when their rapping n switching up every few lines at times, i mean you can throw down a million words that rhyme but if your saying it all in a monotone boring ass way then nobodys gonna be running out to throw on your record n crank it.

flow and the beat are the two most absolute integral parts of making music.. if your not flowing smoothly and catchin the rhythem exactly it shows itself pretty clearly as being unprofessional especially on a record.

if your having trouble rapping/recording then work on areas like making your voice sound cooler or adding more melody to your flow and DEF making it smoother n rhyming more directly... a lot of vocal problems lie directly in the flow department in the first place...

try and lay your lyrics out in a way youve never done it before n run with a different styles untill you find something thats really dope.

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