Hey man, this was dope. I liked the feeling and passion in your poetry. You used vivid imagery and a nice vocabulary deffinetely accented the piece well. This had me captured in the words. Keep dropping pieces with feeling like this my dood. The structure was on point too and i felt the image you posted captivated your poem. Great work. I like the idea and the creativity. Nice original piece man.

HIt me for a collabo if you so wish, iF not return the favor on my piece