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Old 11-17-07, 09:36 PM   #23
KempoMRK
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Daubs

im that hot cat, spit flames, you cant even stop that
but wick' must be burnin too...he only ever drops wacks
Wacks/wax lines are played. The nameplay made it a bit better, but it's still too played to be nice.
you call for sex? never get it..ur pussys all a mess
with so many crabs that you probably got claws for legs
Hit ok, but iono, too corny.
his shows are jokes bro, he's the worst of the rappers
cos he picks up the mic..but couldnt rocket workin for NASA
Eh, not feelin the wordplay, seems too obvious to me.
im dauntin and sick, my dark bars are tauntin this kid
so if sonshines, then i guess u better call me eclipse
Nah, sun/son wordplay, ugh.

This reeked of "dude coming from a long layoff who's grasping at straws", 'n that is the case. I'm sure once Daubs gets rid of the rust he'll start droppin cool again.

KB-S

Barz electrifying? Nah, 50 cats peeped his shit & yall ain't seeing one shocked
No need for "Gun Talk". Cuz I ain't feelin ya shit, like I'm receaving Son block
Weird, didn't hit, not liking this.
You need better punches son? Aight, well you can swollow these
Victory follows me; Mr. T lite ain't droppin shit, cuz I am not Apollo Creed
The concept was there, but it was worded so it didn't even work.
I'm droppin his front so Daubs can keep swingin.. From the bottom of nuts
D's a cock gobblin slut, but My fists dome liften like I'm "Daublin up"
Eh, didn't work.
He's been ripped & done.. You like a leg amputie tryin a kick it son
Repeatin ya names the only time these peeps will say "Wicked Won"
One/won wordplay is soo played.

The wording on the majority of these lines was bad, 'n the concepts weren't all that good either.

Sonny Barz

you WACK-HOE. don't look for a victory when you RAP-FLOW
cuz a loss, is 'somethin Lite can't escape' like a 'BLACK-HOLE'
Quite a clever nameplay.
u higher than me?? You'll never COP-THE-POSTION
only way 'Wicked Above Barz'..is if a 'Witch stood on TOP-OF-A-PRISON'
Corny, but creative.
Stay away cuz i'm hungry, and u spit "DINNER-RAPS",-SON
my lines'll 'Eat K'...like that "Cockroach in MEN-IN-BLACK-1"
Eh, didn't really like this.
Ya punches have been said, u BASICALLY-STUPID,-LAME.
u just 'repeatin what other people say'..like 'LACEY-IN-POOTIE-TANG'
Nah.

I instantly thought SUPER NEWB when I saw the capitalisation stuff, but your punches were ok. I'd drop the caps and "'s and -'s though.

T Lite

Wicked One? Please....I’m like the modern day stick-up-kid
I’d throw your rhymes on the floor, but I don’t wanna pick-up-shit
Nah, too simple.
K…let me start by attacking your B-S punches
You’ll never rise to my level like paraplegic munchkins
Paraplegic lines are mad played, 'n this came off corny as well.
I’m not one to discriminate, I murk all races ya dig
Open your eyes son, you just got murked by a white bitch!
Simple.
Please don’t cry about me Sonn-ying your Barz
Cuz your name is the only thang worse than your punches are!
Nahhh.

Nothing to this verse, very simple stuff.

Sonny got this. I thought this would be a onesided victory for Daubs when I saw his name in the title, but he's too rusty. Sonny had a couple of creative 'n clever nameplays 'n that's all he needed to win. Daubs was the runner up though, he was better than T and KB, mainly because of his wording.

v/ Sonny Barz
Runner up - Daubs
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