Thanks for all the comments.

I'm going to be re-doing this track incorperating some opinions I got from people.. (hopefully it works.) So, I'm going to want the same HARSH honesty when I drop here again.

13th, why let negative opinions affect you? I WANTED negative feedback. This is my first audio, and it's not like I'm releasing a CD. I want to know every criticism, founded or not, so that I can improve on my weaknesses. I've always liked writing, it's been a hobby for some time, but I've gotten to a point where I'm kind of bored of just writing. So I plan on start dropping audios every now and then for fun. Afterall, this isn't a career for me.. it's a hobby that I am currently enjoying.

^ Longest Post By Me In Weeks..

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