I love the hate/love-concept because I've been through this before so I know exactly what you're saying here. The emotion was strong and raw, managed to portray the feelings and struggle quite well. Vocab was a little too basic, I don't mind that usually but try to get more in it next time (I'm also working on it because mine's quite basic too). But that didn't affect the content of the piece whatsoever. Just try to have that bit more, it will help readers to form a picture inside their mind and such. But this was a good drop for sure!

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