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Old 05-12-04, 06:46 AM   #11
HELLonEARTH
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I`m quick to stomp on this fool.. have ya brain`s in-print
You lack talent
So i stay rantin`.. an leave ya buried with a 2 minute stint
Good opening
Oh you didn`t.. did you? Blacksmith? The fuck is that? A diss?
Another net-whore
Your talent`s questioned more.. than the line above this
An Wacksmith improves to stay level with herb`s
Spare the nuisance
This is mediocre for a punch
You make less sense.. like startin` ya verse with a blurb
See Admin`s are sure to delete ya script an bin it
The second error
I dissed you twice.. your first mistake was postin` it
Good punch
I`ll warn ya now.. i`v heard it all before.. you got nothin` new
Cussin` me?
You should quote me.. to have a chance of typin` dope too
Aiight closer


aint done this in a minute so check it..
This guy is just dancing with bad vibes..regular casualty on front line, cos hes prone to bad rhymes.
Good opening
im a heavy hitter so its best you play a ready quitter..your whole flows a tip of hollow needing heavy fillers.
Ok punch
Im a heavyweight while your just punching thin air...its obvious your transparent, your 'rhymes' just 'aint there'.
Ha hah ha
reaching up at me is the only time youll reach for the sky..he asked for a battle so hes 'Ready 2 Die'.damn hes 'Unbelivable'
I like this one
this aitn business so dope rhymes you cant afford..cheap mug doesnt know short dicks 'cum short'.
Nice
your method dont kill me, its just your wackness,, your brain caps shattered looks like your spittin in practice
eh, this was kinda......
you punch cotton bags while i rush rotten fags...it was inevitable this limp dick was gonna end up last...
Need a better closing

Aiight I'll show ya how it goes
Casual-8.5
Blacksmith-9

Casual I really wasn't feeling your flow
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