ok....

seemed like the beat was missing the snare drums at the end of the bars....i dunno..it had potential to be dope...but i think it was missing a lil bit...im thinking it was the snars at the end of the bars....i dunno a lot about beat making...so...yea...

ok..it seems like the flow is off on both verses...its not horrible flow...but it just seems like its not on beat very well...and wasnt very consistent....

hook was ok...

honestly this really isnt my type of thing

it seemed like the flows fell off more when the beat broke down in the verses like it does at the 10 second mark in the beat....


delivery is good for this type of thing....id imagine itd be good at a show......

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