Aight, first off nothing amazing in both verses, but hey, first round didn't expect the best outta people.

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Came with little to no creativity. I expected someone to bury a loved one, it was ok. Vocab was fine, flow was on for most of the verse, just the story line really lost my attention. Nothing amazing, nothing even really quote worthy, a typical topical verse in my opinion.

Po' Wit.:

First off, it is gonna be fun if I battle you. With that said, your verse. A little for creativity far as plot is concerned. Nothing amazing still, but least you didn't go with the expected plain, you added somethin else to it. Vocab and all that is straight, but nothing that will make me read this again.

Powit for having some creativity.

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