ehhh im not really feelin this...i like the vocab and all and i understand the concept u were tryin to come with....but it all seemed forced it wasn't a smooth read....if this was like a keystyle i would say take some of those vocab words out cause its really not needed...i like how u tryin to be creative though bring something different....keep doing what u do though just my opinion....7/10 ~1~

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