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Old 03-20-07, 09:23 PM   #9
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Aight, the problem for me right off the bat is that this is a track that's considered classic to me. It just ain't working with a remix especially since I've heard remixes to this that are off the chain for real.


Now, with that out of the way....


Zone, your delivery on this seemed all over the place to me. Your lyrics were nice and it flowed well, but without the delivery it just seemed all jumbled. No hate man, just how I felt about it...

Trip came a little better in my eyes cause his delivery caught the ear. His style commands the listener. Lyrics and flow were there like usual....


Overall, I thought it was a good track, but not the best I've heard from either of you. Not really something I'd bump over and over, but it was cool for a listen
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