Alright, well I thought my first two lines were nice name plays and my other bars were decent, but since I didn't really get the review I expected last week I figured I'd post it up in here and see the criticism I can get to improve...(I explained each bar incase people didn't get em)

Eye-Que Vs. Keyed

Listen..Ya trends out, like low rise jeans and leather..
and I ain't only talking about my verse when I say..
..I'ma Key...10x better..
(Here I was saying how not in my verse will I key ten times better, but that I am "Keyed" but 10 times better)
I excrete fluids from bitches and your next to bleed..
I've gotta lock on pussy...and that locks been Keyed!!
(Basically, just saying Keyed is pussy)
Open and exposed...a hidden secret surpassed..
You couldn't produce creative shit..
With a constructive brain in your ass!!
(Most people got this)
I devour these fools, why you strive to cop a taste..
This dude can't be champ..
They don't make belts small enough to fit around his waist..
(Haha filler)
This fag loves rappin on computers..son he fears mics..
Dude raps in front of mirrors just so he can appear nice..
(Most people got this)
He can't spit, this dick's into lay-text(latex)..
Now look how I've stopped this pussies flow...
By inserting some play-text..
(I guess filler)
You're embarrasing, with those lines your forcing..
Man..This dude has been wacked since birth..
Just like his foreskin..
(Dissin him about being wack)