aiight good verse......here's mine.....

Call ya brain "wackness" cuz all ya rhymes "revolve" around it lyke a spinning "axle"/
He "predicted this battle" so he decided to "take" the L and leave his barz canceled*
All ya rhymes "psychological" but due to the "problems" it'll never "break-through"/
Your drop wuz "premature" so in this battle of "lessons" its easy to take out "virtue"/**
You say ya intellect's "authentik" then gettin a "metal brain" to help you "spit hard's" an "upgrade"/
If "actions speak louder then words" then your "impression of a rapper" couldn't be guessed in "charades"***
His pro "desires" could never come true, so his "vulgar" style deserves no "pro-fane"(profane)/
He neva "kills humans" cuz he "butchers lyrics" so bad he makes the mic feel pain****
Need to "get back to the basics" cuz "a rookie startin off rite" is essential/
Your rhymes show your "talent-less" which "leads" to you neva havin PoTeNtIaL....

*he left the x n took out tha l in his previos name L.X. ....two lines across canceled.....wackness cancels wackness n tha lines are in his name....(u kan get it)
**patience is in his title....and patience is a virtue.....impatience takes out patience..
***actions speak louder.....if he kant act lyke a rapper...den he kant rhyme like one
****profance is bad language, pro desires, the mics bleeding
if you dont get it don't vote.......good luck homie......