Xquizit - cool laid back beat. good story. Your flow started off really strong but fell off a little near the end. WWork on your emotion a little. This was a decent listen tho. Good job.

Rahwerk - Dope dope dope beat. Your flow and delivery needs work. It's more your delivery. Work on breathe control as well. Your lyrics were aight.

I'm givin this to xquizit for better flow and delivery. Plus he had a really good storyteller track.

Good luck in week 2 to both of you.

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