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Old 04-07-06, 04:44 PM   #7
~Babylon~
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Voted For: Mimesis

Man. . you've been wack for ages, so the beat down. . just swallow this
Cause when STEEL spits. .
. .it's because I've smashed his body into a wall of it
.......ummmm...not a great opener
You grew up by yourself. . fuck it though, I'll keep wrecking this "vet"
Faggot, your dad bounced faster then every fucking check that you get
......cool.......this was aiight
ARE YOU SERIOUS?. . That went out in '01. . your verse won't beat mine
But now I KNOW you're getting the boot. . if you're still using defeat lines
cool.......personal...
I mean, come on. . Fletcher handed you a loss, just left you bloody, kid
So I'll give you 1-2. . like the league you haven't beaten ANYBODY in
......WERD
Congrats!. . I saw your sig too. . "WOOD". . Ha, I'm smacking this guy
I see how you typed it. .
. .and it just shows RV how it has such a capital impact on your life
....ummmmmmm.....no.....not good
You queer. . everybody knows I'm better then you, you ain't winning
Even the fucking ears of corn are trying to stop this fruit from spitting
na...didnt really like it.....but thats my opinion
You can't step up. . never been good, and you can't see my verse
So you took the road less traveled. .
. .cause each site needs one person to be the worst
ummmmmmm.....no your falling off a bit in this part of the verse......
And that's you. . so to end this, let me just say you suck at flowin'
But you will get to be electric, EEL. .
. .cause I plan to dump your body into a fucking ocean
not a great closer........

............7/10




Lets Get This Poppin Rapidly,I Defy Gravity Within Spoken Rhyme.
My Punches'll React Thoughtless Just To Leave You With An Open Mind!
....no.........self glorification
Last Battle U Paid The Price,Now You Gotta Save A Grand.
Cuz How You Gonna Bank On a Win,An Cant Afford The payment Plan!
this didnt even make sense.........
Watch Me Slay This Man,Bars Scar an Leave Mim In Sin.
Fag Couldnt Waste His Time On Seconds,But Stay Watchin Min.(Men)
wack wordplay.........but at least its werd play
^Yeah Noobish To Explain A Punch,Butt Fuck It He's Ass.
See I Drop Solid Shit While Waiting For Mim's Gas To Pass.
played......shit lines
I Crashed His Class,Smashed His Present Cuz Its SO Worthless.
Stupid Fuck Walked A Mile In His Shoes To Find His Soul Purpose!
was that wordplay?...was that a punch?....i cant tell
Slash This Liar For Puttin A Blast On Sire,U Ask If Im Higher..
He Couldnt Match My Bars If it Struck em An Lit Ur Ass On Fire!
ummmmmm....that closer sucked......


3/10



mim wins.........period..........
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