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Old 04-07-06, 06:27 PM   #8
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Voted For: Mimesis

Prometheus - You had an overall good verse. Nice opener, good structure, Some real good punches and some that weren't that hot. You used multi's a little bit but there could of been more. Vocab. could of been better too. But overall i think it was a good drop.

Mimesis - I think this was a fairly decent battle. You had nice punches, but a few were sketchy. Good structure and you had more personals. You could of used more multi's but i think overall you drop was better.

Good Battle.
RTF Thanx.
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