Ah, I agree. This was a great battle from the both of you kids. I felt like both of you brought different styles and needed elements to the table - and it came down to the reader's choice, not the technicalities of all the parts of a good piece.. I guess it just depends on the reader but I think that Mariah took this one for her outstanding flow and her solid and tight piece. Jonathon had a little more storyline strong piece, but it was a little simple in parts. Mariah took this one, and I felt she did the better job in this case.

Vote : Mariah

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