are you serious?!!!!!

Dun... this is prolly one of the most prehistoric styles i've seen in many moons.... this whole piece has gone through several stages of fossilization... you went from talking ab out your drive and how trying to "build new paths" and go straight into shit talking and rhyming just for the sake of it.... it started to make little since as you went on:

im the rob,from those who made me sob,gotta do suning aint got a job

da hell is THAT?!!!

dont tell any1 im a murderer,if you diss me i better of heard of ya,or i'l be at your front door,2 fuck ur hore,kill you and kick u out the back door

Ridiculous closer.... no focus... no message... no thought put into it at all.... if you want people to take you seriously you may wanna spend more time on your craft.... work on rhyme scheme....vocabulary... content... wordplay... consistancy... man, the whole gambit needs help.... if you can manage to scrounge up some OLD rv OM's i'd suggest that you do that and get an idea of how good some of the pieces actually were before this site went to shyt

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