I really find your stuff to be overrated, fyre. How is this original when it's based off a major thing shown on all news stations? How is showing two perspectives now original? Everything you rhyme seems to topical generic to me, you need to think outside the box, I don't know what that guy was thinking. A dead mother leaving a father and child behind? Done. Major catastrophe? Done. Heaven's gates? Done. 9/10ths of your emotional lines? Done. The whole topical seemed like something a kid could write...no offense.

Creativity- No.
Emotion- Hardly.
Structure- Okay.
Flow- Okay.
Vocabulary- Okay.

7/10

RTF on either Nice Guy Rhapsody or Last Verse in the Universe.