you came outta nowhere lol... whoa i wasn't feeling how you started that off, you were yelling real hard at the beginning. chorus was aight, the phone line thing was creative but i think it woulda sounded better with the guy singing alone, flow was str8 as well.. having a deep voice on a deep beat, you shouldn't try to be over-emotional on the track, it collides with the original mood of the instrumental. storyline was kept up through-out, was overall a decent track. not bad at all... get at me,
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