in that orange horizon, you can hear thunder in the distance
the storms rushing near, and my heartbeat starts to quicken
there's life in those raindrops, if you stop and listen closely
its music for the mind and the rhythm always leaves me feeling so free

^this is nice, but you could of left out 'always' and 'feeling'. Just helps it flow a lot better bro.

The rest of this is solid as fuck, its not a topical verse, its more like a verse ready to record.

i like the emotion in it, and the smooth metas. Vocab isnt to extensive, but meh, fuck it. This is good.

Stay dropping.


pz